Essays returned

Today in class, we recieved our essays. Caitlyn, Trish, and I were very pleased with our grade. We feel pretty silly for not being thorough with our proof reading. I definitely got a lot out of that assignment. It definitely taught me how to write much better, because Trish and Caitlyn are very strong writers. I was kind of dissapointed that it was boring. I was thinking about that as we were wokring on it, but i couldn't think of anything to make it more interesting, and still maintaining the formal aspect of the paper. I hope that I can figure out how to avoid that boringness in the future.